Story change!!!!!!!!

We had a serious think about what were going to do and instead of writing it and taking time, we made a recording on what we wanted to day:

We feel this was vital to do as our video was getting too confusing and I kept saying this to the other two but it finally came through and they realised how crazy the idea was, instead we are now going for a much better music video which is not simple, but is much simpler than the before idea and I feel this will work better as we can get the resources and we do not need the sheer amount of people or budget to do the last one. Also we took into account what the focus groups said and we changed accordingly and we feel they would prefer this more after looking at what they liked and disliked about our last one. we have taken on the idea of there being no treasure but there is more adventure and emotion which is what they wanted more of and also we added a few more scenes with singing in, another thing we needed more.
the only thing we have done against the focus group is that we no longer have the 'alter ego' as this jut was not going to work with our skills, we were demanding too much from ourselves and we realised that now so the focus group helped massively in the decision to think up the story again!