Focus group presentation and our ideas for the story

Me Karl and Carl all worked together and created a presentation for the focus groups we have got so far so that we can show them this and get the information we need also, I have uploaded it and it is here:

 

We felt this was valid enough to get the information we needed and also show them some other material to get a feel on our genre. It could have had more interactive parts but we felt this was enough to get the information we needed and to show them our idea.

Our idea also is shortly shown in this presentation and we wanted to do this so we can get their thoughts on this, this was not guaranteed as our story as we wanted to get their opinions first and see if they like the idea and that we will change the story so that it works and the audience will prefer it and we are using the focus group to get the best story we can!