This was made by all of us as a group and we all put in a input and made it together over the period of the day.
I think we did a great job with this because it has lots of information and is in very good detail. We have covered all the main ideas I feel we have spoken in very good detail about it and the surrounding ideas of that part of Mise en Scene. We have also presented it well by making it in a presentation because if this was all one piece of writing it would have been very boring and would not of put the point across as well, and is not very imaginative idea wise. I also like that there are small pictures in places to brighten it up more and also they are relevant to what he is talking about throughout
I think it could have been improved though by making the amount of writing more interesting. It is still large blocks of writing, but on a presentation. It is all relevant but it is just alot of work for what it is. It is in great detail but it could of maybe been separated better and imagnative ways of doing so. To separate the amount of writing we could of included more pictures or made voice recordings about it so that it saved time and made more sense to the reader/listener.
Overall I think this was a great way of displaying the information but will small tweaks it could have looked a little better. It is definately level 4 but to get top marks it could have had a better and more interactive way of displaying this information.
I think we did a great job with this because it has lots of information and is in very good detail. We have covered all the main ideas I feel we have spoken in very good detail about it and the surrounding ideas of that part of Mise en Scene. We have also presented it well by making it in a presentation because if this was all one piece of writing it would have been very boring and would not of put the point across as well, and is not very imaginative idea wise. I also like that there are small pictures in places to brighten it up more and also they are relevant to what he is talking about throughout
I think it could have been improved though by making the amount of writing more interesting. It is still large blocks of writing, but on a presentation. It is all relevant but it is just alot of work for what it is. It is in great detail but it could of maybe been separated better and imagnative ways of doing so. To separate the amount of writing we could of included more pictures or made voice recordings about it so that it saved time and made more sense to the reader/listener.
Overall I think this was a great way of displaying the information but will small tweaks it could have looked a little better. It is definately level 4 but to get top marks it could have had a better and more interactive way of displaying this information.
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